Just a small description of a chardonnay aimed at the very young market (like 18 - 25 year olds)

It doesn’t have to be perfect, just good ideas mainly.
All I have right now is
"Brimming with flavours of ripe plums, pears and strawberries fit for a king, you better believe this stuff’s what Dave and his mates were telling you about."
but my tutor said she didn’t like it
For a graphics project.
Thanks for any help!
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I have a couple cases of fresh pears and thought I’d make wine or brandy. I don;t know how. Do you?
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I am working on some new gift ideas. If a friend or lover or colleague sends a nice basket for you with lets say a pineapple, some pears, some apples, strawberries and grapes along with a personal card and your favorite snack or wine or cheese would you like it? What else would you want in the gift basket? What wouldn’t you want in the basket?
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Called Chaptalization, not only does it seem like cheating and cheapening the quality of wine, is it really necessary? All the wine recipes I find for making it at home call for literally pounds of sugar. Would using the right fruit at the right ripeness result in a good amount of alcohol?
What about for other berry fruits, apples, or pears?
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